I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello Hamish. You have done a great job at making the art work look different. I'm not sure if I would say that your work is colourful.It does have more colour than the original.For work to be colourful I'd use a mixture of all colours. The water reminds me of water that has been contaminated because of the green.It looks like algae. Have a wonderful Christmas and holiday. I look forward to seeing more of your holiday learning.
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Hello Hamish.
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great job at making the art work look different.
I'm not sure if I would say that your work is colourful.It does have more colour than the original.For work to be colourful I'd use a mixture of all colours.
The water reminds me of water that has been contaminated because of the green.It looks like algae.
Have a wonderful Christmas and holiday.
I look forward to seeing more of your holiday learning.
Hello Hamish.
ReplyDeleteJust a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
Kia Ora Hamish,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
What a fantastic recolour. I love your bold choices! I think yours looks way better than the original. It’s brighter, and stands out more! Ka pai!
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Happy blogging!
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)