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Thursday, 4 June 2020

Making a strong narrative

Kia ora Raiders

Today i woll tell you about my writing we are.
Today we change boring sentences a strong sense of sneeze.
 Anna sat down Slowly.

The old attic is Creepy and cold. There were spiders everywhere. There were rats and a Broken window. There was blood dripping from the ceiling. Anna walked up into the room. She saw something sticking out, it was a mirror. Anna sat down Slowly on the  Wooden floor. She Went Slowly to touch the mirror. The glass shattered on to the floor. Anna gets pulled into the mirror and her Hands get chopped off And the mirror folls dan and it Shedded  
Glass was everywhere  And did rats sander corner  and a Killer  Clown Through the window 

 Thank you forl ooking at my blog looking at my blog did my sory I give you goosebumps
be free to coomennt.





5 comments:

  1. Hello Hamish.
    Can you change the text so it goes down the page and not across it?I would like to read your work but it's a bit hard too at the moment.

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    1. Hi Mrs Cassidy theyou for looking at my blog be free to coomennt

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  2. Hello Hamish.
    Just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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