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Wednesday, 24 June 2020

How to capture your audience

How to capture your audience.

Hi readers.

How are yuo today? hope you are well!!!.

Al gave Miss D coffee. This is Miss D's "not exciting" sentence.

Miss D changed the sentence to make it exciting by adding "more exciting words" like kindly, delicious, hot and cappuccino.

Al kindly, rewarded Miss D with a delicious, hot cappuccino. this is her sentence. cool huh!!!


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1 comment:

  1. Mrs Cassidy12 July 2020 at 16:07

    It would of been nice to see a sentence that you had changed,to make it more exciting Hamish.
    Do you think you could make your own and put it on your blog?.
    Have a great week.

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