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Sunday, 22 April 2018

going to the gardens

Today me and my family went to the gardens and i had alot of fun we had a picnic and feed the ducks we also went to the art gallery and the museum it was a nice day out we also went to see my cousins and one of my cousin stay he is 12 years old his name is troy.

7 comments:

  1. hello my name is Ivan.What a lucky day you had,if i were you i would like going to the museum the most

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  2. hi it's kian here i like your going to the garden blog a lot maybe
    just a bit more information about it but it was still cool

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  3. hi it's Te mihaea here i like you going to the garden blog a lot maybe just a bit more informatiom about it but it was still cool

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  4. Hi Hamish it is me Addison and good job for doing the garden story but maybe make the words a bit bigger and make sure that it makes sense bye.

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  5. hay it is Benaiah you are good at witting did you think about the gardens and you cod witt more on it

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  7. Hi Hamish my name is Brodie I go to Hornby high school and like your writing how you where feeding the ducks and having a picnic. But was wondering what else you were doing?.

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