How to capture your audience.
Hi readers.
How are yuo today? hope you are well!!!.
Al gave Miss D coffee. This is Miss D's "not exciting" sentence.
Miss D changed the sentence to make it exciting by adding "more exciting words" like kindly, delicious, hot and cappuccino.
Al kindly, rewarded Miss D with a delicious, hot cappuccino. this is her sentence. cool huh!!!
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, 24 June 2020
Monday, 15 June 2020
Thursday, 4 June 2020
Making a strong narrative
Kia ora Raiders
Today i woll tell you about my writing we are.
Today we change boring sentences a strong sense of sneeze.
Anna sat down Slowly.
Today i woll tell you about my writing we are.
Today we change boring sentences a strong sense of sneeze.
Anna sat down Slowly.
The old attic is Creepy and cold. There were spiders everywhere. There were rats and a Broken window. There was blood dripping from the ceiling. Anna walked up into the room. She saw something sticking out, it was a mirror. Anna sat down Slowly on the Wooden floor. She Went Slowly to touch the mirror. The glass shattered on to the floor. Anna gets pulled into the mirror and her Hands get chopped off And the mirror folls dan and it Shedded
Glass was everywhere And did rats sander corner and a Killer Clown Through the window
Thank you forl ooking at my blog looking at my blog did my sory I give you goosebumps
be free to coomennt.
Friday, 29 May 2020
Maths blog
Hi readers,
Today I m going tell you about my maths.
Today I m going tell you about my maths.
I made a Google drone about red hearts and pink Hearts
Thank you fore looking at my blog
Tuesday, 26 May 2020
word of the week
Hi readers,
The word of the week is embarrassed.
Embarrassed mins wen you do safing sily and people are watching.
Thank you for reading.
Friday, 22 May 2020
Magic Maths Pattern
hello my amazing fabulous people!
yesterday i did sam maths wif Diane and Isiic
do you want to do this Matt's click HER
if you whent to do the maths the
lek is up the top
Summertime I got confused because it look dots
but I got the hang of it
yesterday i did sam maths wif Diane and Isiic
do you want to do this Matt's click HER
if you whent to do the maths the
lek is up the top
Summertime I got confused because it look dots
but I got the hang of it
Thank you for reading my blog.
Word of the week
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