Word of the week

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    This is my word of the week withdrawn be  free to comennt

How to capture your audience

How to capture your audience.

Hi readers.

How are yuo today? hope you are well!!!.

Al gave Miss D coffee. This is Miss D's "not exciting" sentence.

Miss D changed the sentence to make it exciting by adding "more exciting words" like kindly, delicious, hot and cappuccino.

Al kindly, rewarded Miss D with a delicious, hot cappuccino. this is her sentence. cool huh!!!

word of the week

  Hi readers, here is my word of the week blog.

    be free to comennt
   
   

Making a strong narrative

Kia ora Raiders

Today i woll tell you about my writing we are.
Today we change boring sentences a strong sense of sneeze.
 Anna sat down Slowly.

The old attic is Creepy and cold. There were spiders everywhere. There were rats and a Broken window. There was blood dripping from the ceiling. Anna walked up into the room. She saw something sticking out, it was a mirror. Anna sat down Slowly on the  Wooden floor. She Went Slowly to touch the mirror. The glass shattered on to the floor. Anna gets pulled into the mirror and her Hands get chopped off And the mirror folls dan and it Shedded  

Glass was everywhere  And did rats sander corner  and a Killer  Clown Through the window 

 Thank you forl ooking at my blog looking at my blog did my sory I give you goosebumps

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